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"Momma, I don't wanna to go to Gwamma's!"by =choirsoftheheavens
Jenna swerved sharply to miss a curb that she could've sworn was further away. If she got there faster, maybe she'd still be able to say goodbye.
"Momma!"
"Shut up, Mary Jane," she said, and promptly crashed into the road divider.
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i just wanted to thank you directly for the critique, as a reply would have gone to the critique-it account.
i don't mind at all that it took a while, by the way...it's still november, so it's not even late!
i certainly like your suggestions, and will go about changing stuff (eh, in due time...busybusybusy!)
i'm glad you liked the piece (and featured it here on your page).
i also find it interesting to note that you're 14...i love finding young artists here. often, it's hard to tell by their work, but then you find a small number, like 14, on their pages. (i myself am 15, so i love finding people my age ^^)
and now i shall stop prattling
thanks again!
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your suggestions were perfectly fine; i've got tough skin, and besides, they were mostly word issues
the old folk take over most everything, don't they? but it's okay; we youngins can shine on their rainy parade anyway. *rachel-rhapsody is 14? whoa. did not know that one! see what i mean? it's so shocking, since she doesn't write like a 14 year old. 17-19, maybe, but not 14. that's what i love about this site...
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and she's wonderful.
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so i hope that people like her stay young and awesome forever...
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