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FFM 6 - Complications
by =KneelingGlory

Hey there. Being a primarily a prose writer, and rather enthusiastic about branching out, reading this with the purpose of critique ha...

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Education is a Gun
by =julietcaesar

Hello there, stranger! Well, with my new sub, I decided to critique one of your beautiful pieces because, well, they deserve it. And y...

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i gotta feeling, whoooo-hooooo;

Journal Entry: Sat Nov 21, 2009, 8:36 PM
tell me someone else thinks that that song doesn't make sense.


"Education is a Gun" by =julietcaesar

BANG!

(go read, or I'll shoot.)

:heart: anne.

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  • Reading: Neverwhere
  • Watching: sadness wind chimes about me
  • Playing: nothing
  • Eating: (wish it was) something
  • Drinking: (wish it wasn't) water
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=Sepulchral-Roses 2 days 10 hours ago
hello!

i just wanted to thank you directly for the critique, as a reply would have gone to the critique-it account.

i don't mind at all that it took a while, by the way...it's still november, so it's not even late! ;)

i certainly like your suggestions, and will go about changing stuff (eh, in due time...busybusybusy!)

i'm glad you liked the piece (and featured it here on your page).

i also find it interesting to note that you're 14...i love finding young artists here. often, it's hard to tell by their work, but then you find a small number, like 14, on their pages. (i myself am 15, so i love finding people my age ^^)

and now i shall stop prattling ;)

thanks again!

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=choirsoftheheavens 2 days 10 hours ago
Aww...I'm glad to have helped! Critiquing is a hard process, because I never know when I've hit too hard, or when a person can't take the critique. I've had my fair share of people screaming for me to get out of their piece and "my gramar wuz FIEN!", so I've been a little wary of that ever since.

15? :D sweeeeeet. We're outnumbered over here by old folk :lol: but I've seen some very talented writers here who are 14 (*rachel-rhapsody, ~esapromesa, etc.) so we should be covered. :D

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=Sepulchral-Roses 2 days 9 hours ago
:lmao: "my gramar wuz FIEN!"? ahaha you've made my day, dear!

your suggestions were perfectly fine; i've got tough skin, and besides, they were mostly word issues :shrug:

the old folk take over most everything, don't they? but it's okay; we youngins can shine on their rainy parade anyway. *rachel-rhapsody is 14? whoa. did not know that one! see what i mean? it's so shocking, since she doesn't write like a 14 year old. 17-19, maybe, but not 14. that's what i love about this site...:heart:

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=choirsoftheheavens 2 days 7 hours ago
Glad to have!

and she's wonderful. :D I'm just waiting for her to grow old and become more so. :)

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=Sepulchral-Roses 2 days 6 hours ago
ah yes. but sometimes people grow out of creativity; kids don't talk to themselves, teens don't have imaginary friends, adults don't fantasize, and old folk don't dream in the same ways...

so i hope that people like her stay young and awesome forever...

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